Miss Hollings' Writing

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Today in writing, Miss Hollings organised for us to try out some candy floss! We are learning to talk about our senses and share our ideas to a buddy. Check out the amazing ideas Ma'ake had about his experience - "It sounds like a wave coming when you squish it. It smelt like a lollipop. It was chewy and melted into little bits of sugar."





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  1. Mrs Courtney-McLeodJuly 27, 2020 at 9:07 PM

    WOW Ma'ake! What great descriptive writing. I bet the candy floss was delicious! Next time save some for me please!!! :)

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  2. richie tikolevuAugust 16, 2020 at 9:52 PM

    Nice to see that the kiddos are enjoying learning something new while they were at school..

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