Miss Hollings' Writing
Today for writing, Miss Hollings' class got to make some popcorn. We talked about what it looked like, smelt like, sounded like, felt like and tasted like. It was super yummy and we all shared some amazing ideas. Check out Georgia's amazing sentence - "The popcorn smelt like ashes. It sounded crinkly and before we popped it, it felt like a bunch of pencils in a pencil case."
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